Good..but..
I just needed the instructions and I had to watch the text scroll through the screen for about an hour. Everything you said was so incredibly complex that I couldn't even understand what the heck you were saying. The worse part was how I wanted to read everything again so I could TRY to understand, but the text disappeared out of NO WHERE and I had to wait...wait...wait for it to scroll back down...So many code names for objects...so...confusing...
My suggestion would be to make things a little more simple and just list the instructions, and maybe put your story BEFORE you start the actual game part with a skipping option so people can get right down to the action. Also, WHATEVER YOU DO, don't use the scrolling tool. Some people, like me, can get VERY impatient ;P